From the pov of the killer. Appreciate input on the concept, the character, or the writing. I know this is "background" but hopefully from a freash pov. The action heats up from this point on in real time. Thanks!
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My thanks to Benjamin for the detailed and helpful feedback, Comments apprecioated on this draft and story concept. I'll post the second chapter soon.
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Hi all. Sorry for the long absence, been finishing the SciFi novel and researching a new idea (below). Appreciate your comments on the storyline and/or the writing. May pursue it as a ss or novel if warrented. Thanks, Bob.
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Hi. I'm a member of the Short Story Group and wanted to share a poem for comments or critique. I realize it's a bit old school, but here it is just the same.
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Robert, I'd love to get your opinion on some of my most recent posts - the revised version of Songbird Seven is Going Down and following chapters. Each chapter is about 2 pages long and still in the rough draft stages. I'd appreciate any feedback you can provide. Thanks so much.
A belated welcome to the Writers Network. I'm glad you're here. Thanks so much for posting "The Chronicles of Cassandra" looks like a great read and it's getting so much great feedback.
Let me know if there's anything I can do, but looks like Chris our SyFy expert has things well in hand.
Robert, I posted a little piece of my newest sci-fi novella... The whole thing is rough. I am curious to hear what you think. It is in the short Stories section.
Welcome to Oncewritten. Glad to have you with us. Please take a moment and look through our Groups and Forums sections to see how we do things around here. Have fun and I hope to see some of your work soon.
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A belated welcome to the Writers Network. I'm glad you're here. Thanks so much for posting "The Chronicles of Cassandra" looks like a great read and it's getting so much great feedback.
Let me know if there's anything I can do, but looks like Chris our SyFy expert has things well in hand.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Chris
Welcome to Oncewritten. Glad to have you with us. Please take a moment and look through our Groups and Forums sections to see how we do things around here. Have fun and I hope to see some of your work soon.
Christopher Silva